Saturday, January 25, 2014

She's gone. #1


Hey, so im back to blogging and I deleted all the past stories and im starting from zero. So I hope you like this new story & don't forget the feedback please xx
 
 
 
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She was out for her morning jog, the cold breeze was brushing through her long brown hair. She loved the way it made her feel. She loved the feeling of running on an early morning, she felt like she was running away from all her problems. The chilly weather made it even better. She stopped for a second and took a deep breath, she knew it was probably time to go back home and get ready for school.

 

Her name was Sarah, she was a 16 year old. she had the perfect features. Long brown hair, big brown eyes, and a perfect body, but she never knew that one day it will all be taken away. She never knew that one day, she would be someone, no one gave a damn about. People always looked at her because they saw beauty in her face, no one ever looked deep inside her soul. No one ever knew how broke she really was. All they ever cared about was the outside. After what happened to her, the pain reflected on her outer beauty. So she just lost everyone. People who she thought were her friends. People who eventually only cared about her outer beauty. They were blind to see how at that point, she really needed someone by her side.. but there was no one.. What was really going on at that time?..

 

 

So it all somehow started when she lost her sister. They were like one soul dwelling in two bodies. They were the kind of sisters that would never fight over anything, literally! They had the kind of relationship that was based on trust. They trusted each other with everything. Her sisters name was Fay, she was Sarah’s twin, only that she had shorter hair, other than that they looked exactly the same. As I was saying, they actually had the exact same personality.  Its actually been almost a year since Sarah lost her sister but she still cant manage to get over it.

 

No one ever thought that Sarah, the most cheerful/ happy person would be this depressed at some point. Her smile never left her face before, but now she cant even fake a smile! She lost so much weight, her face just grew even paler and people just started distancing themselves from her. They look at her as a scary monster now. She actually never trusted anyone but her sister, but now? All the feelings are bottled up inside and she cant open up to anyone, because she just knows that no one will listen or care.

 

So how did Fay die?

Fay had been hit by a car.

That day, the day she was hit by a car, She wasn’t the only one who got killed. She died, and killed Sarah’s heart with her. She took her beautiful soul away.

 

From that day on.. Sarah had literally been a heartless person. She didn’t only lose her sister and soul mate, she lost her self…

6 comments:

  1. Yay!!! Ur back!!! Welcome back =))
    AMAZING chapter!!!!! Loved it, u got me hooked. The way u wrote it was just perfect!! It sounds like it's gonna be an amazing story, and I can't wait for the following chapter to come!!!!
    Can't wait for more !!!
    Post soon <333

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    1. THANKYOUUU!!!!!<3 Means a lot to me, so glad you enjoyed it<3 Ill post on Wednesday hopefully<3

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